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During this edit I noticed
that some of the title weren't sitting right on the screen or I had missed some
out. This meant that for the next edit I would have to spend more time figuring
out what I needed to do. I also noticed that some of the typography was moving
or on the wrong setting so I will have to edit that later.
Moreover I decided to try
out the juxtaposition with the music to highlight the binary opposites of the
characters, but once again it didn't quite work.
However, we showed this
completed sequence to a focus group. The main feedback we received stated that
the narrative was unclear, as the scene where the protagonist sneaks out of the
house was filmed in daylight. As this was a key part of our narrative, it means
that we would have to re-film the outside scenes just so that we maintain a
high level of continuity.
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